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Writing Effective Headlines to Increase Conversions

by michellereno Expert(December 2007) (rank 13th)
 
 
Originally posted at E-Marketing Performance...


In copywriting, the headline is one of the most crucial elements. If effective, it will get your reader’s attention and cause them to want to read on; obviously, if not effective and well written, you’ll lose them before you even get them. Similarly, holiday window displays exist solely to get shoppers’ attentions and make them want to go in the store. If a window display is boring and lifeless, shoppers will most likely walk right by without even a glance.

In order to be effective, headlines (and even holiday window displays) must do the following:

  • Grab the attention of your target audience. It’s one thing for a headline to grab attention, but if your target audience wouldn’t find it interesting, you’re essentially barking up the wrong tree. Similar to how social media marketing needs to target the audience, you want your headlines to be relevant to your readers. If you’re content is about a sensitive subject (like understanding cancer), you wouldn’t want to write a funny headline. Your readers will become upset and lose trust in you once they realize what they’re reading about.
  • Appeal to your audience’s needs. You have to know what your audience needs and then have to give them a reason to want to read on. By exposing their need in the headline, you’ll pique their interest and get them to want to read more, and in the text itself, you can tie their need to the benefits of your products or services. An effective way to do this in the headline is by asking a question, and then you give the answer in the body text.

There are many different ways to write headlines that get read:

  • Use a scare tactic. While this can sometimes be effective, it’s important to use it sparingly. By playing off of readers’ fears and insecurities, you can get them to want to read more. If you’re selling mortgage loans, you can write a headline like, “How to Keep From Getting Foreclosed.” Because that’s a genuine fear for many homeowners (especially in today’s topsy turvy real estate market), chances are that many will read on.
  • Inform them. People love to read top lists and how-to articles. For a site selling cloth diapers and organic bedding, you can write “Top Ten Ways to Become a Green Parent”, “How to Become a Green Parent”, or better yet, combine the two “How to Become a Green Parent - Ten Easy Ideas.” The only potential downside to this approach is that many writers are using this type of headline, and yours may get lost with all the others.

To get your readers to want to read on (and for businesses that want to get shoppers in their doors), it’s important that you get their attention at the earliest opportunity. For copywriters, that opportunity is with the headline. You’ll never get conversions if your copy doesn’t get read.

Make it interesting, make it useful, and make it stand apart from the rest.

 
 

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Re: Writing Effective Headlines to Increase Conversions

rene-lemerle
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February 5th

landing page headlines are like email subject lines...one of the most important factors to conversion success is setting expectations around the offer/content - it sounds obvious, but too many marketers try to be too clever and miss the mark.

while its important to embrace techniques to spark interest, and garner audience attention (great suggestions michelle) - if you don't properly set the scene for the offer on the landing page - you'll end up not only alienating the visitor, but probably hurting your brand also.
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Re: Writing Effective Headlines to Increase Conversions

georgebounacos
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January 19th

Very nice piece, Michelle.  So after the headline, what do you find is the piece that substitutes for "most often read" on a landing page?  We all remember from direct mail that the P.S. was especially strong, but they look so horrible on a screen.  I often will use 3 strong bullets in the middle and try to reduce the number of sub-heads.  That's for conversion.  On content pages, I'm sub-head crazy.
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Re: Writing Effective Headlines to Increase Conversions

michellereno
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February 4th

With landing pages, the best idea is to get the most important info out first. Many people don't read the full content of the piece and are scanning for what's next. I agree with your bullet points because they're easily scannable and can help with conversions.
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