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Drop Dead, Bloggers

by georgebounacos Prodigy(February 2008) (rank 17th)
 
 
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Gooruze has seen some terrific articles on writing effective headlines. Michelle Reno's piece just before the holiday offered great headline advice in bullet point form. Easy to read, great advice, who could ask for anything more?

In the bad old days of direct mail, we tried to measure open rate in various ways. We can do that with email, and maybe nothing else has helped legitimate marketers fight the sp@m wars to something of a draw.

But I started to gag on my morning coffee today as I scanned my inbox.

Drop Dead, Bloggers


read the subject line from Chief Marketer.

Holy Cow, someone has gone and ticked them off with something. What's melodrama is brewing in the blogsphere today?

Opening their mail brought me to the first headline. That headline was better defined. "Target To Bloggers: Drop Dead". For those of you who remember the infamous New York headline as the city teetered on the razor's edge of bankruptcy decades ago, then US President Gerald Ford didn't offer a bailout. The headline screamed "Ford To City: Drop Dead". Someone sold a lot of papers that day, eh? The headline today was not only attention grabbing, but a nice bit of homage to one of journalism's most famous headlines.

The link from the inside headline jumped to a well written (if not a little tardy) op-ed piece on Target's reaction to a blogger. You know the story. The piece is pleasant to read, has some good facts and is really more blog than article.

But the subject line on the email is the compelling piece of this article. Unlike a certain golf magazine that used imagery that was in decidedly bad taste (prompting an only-in-America overblown outrage the mainstream has now forgotten because the Giants won the Super Bowl and Britney is in a hospital somewhere), Chief Marketer used a scare headline to grab attention. And it worked. If anyone from that pub is reading this, leave a comment and let us know if your open rate jumped today.

The play was right out of Michelle's article here 6 weeks ago. I opened the mail immediately, skipping two that came in overnight from my partner, because I figured that some blogger had run afoul of the online pub.

Great headlines work.
They cause open rates in email and even direct mail to soar. Even marketers who have used them too many times themselves fall prey to attention grabbing headlines.

Don't think so? You just read this article. Ask yourself why.
 
 

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Re: Drop Dead, Bloggers

georgebounacos
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February 2008

Dan & Michelle - I absolutely agree with you both.  I wasn't talking about conversion, but was interested to see how they broke through the clutter.  I don't think it's a good tactic, and I know it's not a good long-run idea.

But they made me go straight there for a look first thing.  I was curious how the same tactic would play in an audience of online marketing gooruze.  I think we all had similar reactions. 

I do think it's an amazingly effective tease with high risk of reader backlash (not to me, guys, to them, to them!).  If I did a B2C offline mailing for an unknown brand, I might use it (okay, I've used similar) to push the lift rate, but that was in an ad-hoc purchase from a tiny company with a product that a 5-10 year life.  It worked in that environment. 

Online, in a blog or email campaign, I think it would blow up.  That said, and I'm just curious here, how many of you went to the site for the first time after reading this?  And if it wasn't your first visit, was it your first in a while?  Did they succeed in generating buzz like the golf magazine tried and failed with the noose?

I was already on their list, but I never went to the site.  Yesterday, I went to the site.  Then I told X number of online marketers about it and even sent a tweet with a link here.  That's viral buzz.  Maybe it's negative, but do they pick up enough interest as a result to risk it?
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michellereno
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February 2008

Thanks for the lovely mention, George! I'm glad you enjoyed my article. As for the article you mentioned, it's really disrupting to be misled by a headline. It's a lot like another article I wrote called "Don’t Bamboozle Your Readers: Honesty in Copywriting is Key (please don't take this as shameless self-promotion - I merely linked for convenience).
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danlondon
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February 2008

There is a fine line between a headline like this and making the reader upset that the title was so misleading?

Do you have to explain it in the first few words of the text?
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jackie-shervington
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February 2008

oh yes caught my attention ! Of course knowing it is one thing - how often have you stared at a page waiting for headline inspiration. But you always know it when you see it!
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georgebounacos
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February 2008

Thanks, guys.  It was a fun piece to write.   And it was true to boot.  I was expecting that Joe Blogger had outted their CEO for some horrible deed or something.  Fantastic teaser copy.
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dcnorris
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February 2008

I read the article, it worked!  :-)
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ZowbieConsulting
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February 2008

Same here...good article...it was well written.  I like the comment about the Giants and Spears!
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